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Re: Why The Boy Cried 'Wolf'!
I really like this piece, but I think some of the elements were a little odd. For example, Psychologist Woman; she kills wolves and time-travels in her spare time. This ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Alternate Ending
Just out of interest, if all the horcruxes had been destroyed at this point, what happened to Nagini? She only died after Harry was shown dead. I agree with the ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Lead the Way, and I will Follow
I really enjoyed this - you really have a knack for expanding the relationships of "minor" characters (I always imagined McGonagall and Dumbledore together before he was outed :P ). ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: 'I Am' Poetry
While I'm sure I know no more about poetry than you do, I'll give it a shot... Between the ringing choruses And the echoing drumbeats, that form my strong foundation. ...
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Excerpts from my comedy-fantasy story
As a huge fan and slightly smaller writer of the fantasy-comedy genre (Pratchett and Adams FTW), I really like this. I rate 9/10 for comedy, the one mark you lose ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 3 Circus Boy
Great stuff again. Two tiny critiques, just because they struck me as quite odd: 1. We pay with magic, not money.” Doesn't sound like something you would put on the ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Circus Boy Chapter 1
FOUND IT! (took ten pages to find any of your work louisa!:P) It's well good. I honestly couldn't point out any weaknesses that I don't put into my own work. ...
Apr 9, 2008
